Sunday, October 31, 2010
THE OLD POET SAYS
“Poetry,” he said,
“is in the ear (and
by God you've got two
of them) and in the mouth.”
*
“Practice hard
and play free -
poetry happens
when you're not trying.”
*
“The value of
poetry?
I don't know,”
he said.
“The sun comes up
whether I
write or not.”
Saturday, October 30, 2010
THE OLD POET SAYS
“So, then,” they asked,
“why do you
keep at it?”
“I cannot,” he said,
“put the cork
back in the bottle.”
*
“Like plums,
sometimes
the weight
of poems
breaks the branch.”
*
“The blessings of travel
are many, not the least
of which is this
urge to poetry.”
Friday, October 29, 2010
Thursday, October 28, 2010
Wednesday, October 27, 2010
Tuesday, October 26, 2010
Monday, October 25, 2010
Sunday, October 24, 2010
THE OLD POET SAYS
“The measure can be
anything, but must
be regular, some-
how. Irregular
measures are toothless.
You might as well write
prose.”
*
“Empty
your mind. Trust
it will
be filled.”
*
“You do not
believe in
darkness, nor
do you trust
the light. There
is not much
I can give you.”
Saturday, October 23, 2010
THE OLD POET SAYS
“Why write
when there's nothing
to say but
Aha! and
Look at this!”
*
“How to tell
exactly the truth
when truth is so
inexactly?”
*
“How full is this moment?
I will write you a book.
I will write you another one.”
Friday, October 22, 2010
Thursday, October 21, 2010
Wednesday, October 20, 2010
Mountain Lake
in Minnesota?
Mountain? As if.
Mountain does not even
put its foothills here.
Tuesday, October 19, 2010
Monday, October 18, 2010
Sunday, October 17, 2010
THE OLD POET SAYS
“So many words
compete for nothing.”
*
“Gravity is
what undoes us.
Without gravity,
no time.
Without time,
we would be gods.”
*
“If you love
something,
set it free
and wait for it
to come back.
Try this test:
give me
your money.”
Saturday, October 16, 2010
THE OLD POET SAYS
“I make notes as
fast as I can
and still the days
go flying past.”
*
“You not only need to
stay awake,” he said,
“you need to pay attention.”
*
“Water. Ice. Sky. Night. The stars.
What is it you don't understand?”
Friday, October 15, 2010
Thursday, October 14, 2010
Wednesday, October 13, 2010
Tuesday, October 12, 2010
Monday, October 11, 2010
J.D. Whitney, All My Relations. Many Voices Press, Flathead Community College, 777 Grandview Drive, Kalispell, MT 59901. 120 page. $16-paper.
Even a few words, perhaps, are too many when writing about these poems. As is usually the case with Whitney's work, these are spare poems, nothing wasted. And again, as is usually the case with Whitney's work, there is wisdom here, mixed with humor.
"All my relations" is an English approximation of the Lakota notion that we are brother/sister with all things, or "cousin," as Whitney would have it. Each of these 106 poems addresses a particular cousin with respect, though that doesn't mean we don't kill the feeding mosquito:
And perhaps we're not so wise as we think:COUSIN MOSQUITO
I apologizefor interrupting
your
dinner
with death.
COUSIN LOONAre these cousins red with tooth and claw? Yes, at times:
We think you
sadwhat dobut
we know.
And what of our part in how things are?COUSIN HAWK
First the shadows ofyour
meet the mouse.
talons
COUSIN STUMPYes, these are short poems, spare but muscular. The poet's angle of vision is often not the expected one, so that - as with all good poetry - we see things anew. All our cousins are refreshed for us in Whitney's version of them. And in our new understanding we are refreshed ourselves.
Where
more of
you
once stoodsit.I
I have been thinking for some time now that writing short poems is more challenging than writing longer poems, in that with the short poem there is nowhere to hide. Every word, every line is essential - like a pile of boulders, move one and they all fall down. Whitney's short poems succeed, no need to hide anything. Somewhere within them, something jumps and we say "Aha!" I would suggest that you read All My Relations and have a few "Aha!" moments yourself, as with this:
COUSIN STONE
I hear you
speaktooslowly forears.my
Dried rushes
in the low ground.
Higher stands
the corn, ready
for harvest.
The sky is wide
enough for both.
Sunday, October 10, 2010
THE OLD POET SAYS
“No,” he said, “I can't
write long poems
with these short
fingers.”
*
“No rule except the thing,
apprehension of the thing,
and rendering of the apprehension
exactly.”
*
“If I were
usefulI would be
a tin cupnear the water.”
Saturday, October 09, 2010
THE OLD POET SAYS
“In the beauty
of this moment
either you want to
believe or you don't,
but there is no
not knowing.”
*
“Writer's block?
Skin yourself and sit.
Something will come.”
*
“Nothing like
ninety miles an hour
to clear the mind
and show you
what's what.”
Friday, October 08, 2010
Thursday, October 07, 2010
Wednesday, October 06, 2010
Tuesday, October 05, 2010
Monday, October 04, 2010
Sunday, October 03, 2010
THE OLD POET SAYS
“Breath is enough
meaning
for one poem.”
*
“It's not that you finish,
it's how you land.”
*
“Sometimes nothing
and sometimes
I understand the difference.”
Saturday, October 02, 2010
THE OLD POET SAYS
“Some poems make you wonder
which shell the pea's under.”
*
“If you're not ready
and you're not patient
you've already
failed.”
*
“How long
do you wait
for inspiration?”
they asked.
“Until,”
he said.